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Post by Kayla Kaya Sun Nov 14, 2010 2:00 pm

If the sunset was a dream...
Would've we all scream?
The sunset is fun of happiness
Happiness some have never seen,
As we all hear the ocean waves,
And the caves that come through,
We hear slaves of not work,
But slaves of happiness that smirk,
If a sunset was a dream,
The sun would not have fun,
We would all scream,
Live a life of nothing but dreams,
If the sunset was upset,
the tears of the clouds with drop like nothing but rain,
So see what life has gain?
Sunsets,
Sunrise,
Moon and dark,
Life is wonderful,
Sunsets are dark
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Post by Trish Rawrz Sun Nov 14, 2010 2:04 pm

Thta was awesome Razz
Nice Poem indeed lol!
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Post by Kayla Kaya Sun Nov 14, 2010 2:18 pm

Ty trish =D tongue
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Post by Icy Rose Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:30 pm

Cool poem Kaya! (:
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Post by Kayla Kaya Sun Nov 14, 2010 5:20 pm

Tyvm
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Post by Nilla Cookie Sun Nov 14, 2010 9:19 pm

That is a nice poem! Good job! ^-^


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Post by Negative Love Mon Nov 15, 2010 1:56 pm

That is a nice poem indeed!! Great job!! Hope you will write more! Smile
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Post by Katie Dogpaw Mon Nov 15, 2010 10:05 pm

Great poem! To me, that's the work of a proffessional!
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Post by Kayla Kaya Tue Nov 16, 2010 5:47 pm

Ty, ty -bows- xD
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Post by Nilla Cookie Thu Nov 18, 2010 9:07 pm

Lols. xD

You going to write more? You should. This one was excellent!!
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