A poam i wrote:
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Trish Rawrz
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A poam i wrote:
If the sunset was a dream...
Would've we all scream?
The sunset is fun of happiness
Happiness some have never seen,
As we all hear the ocean waves,
And the caves that come through,
We hear slaves of not work,
But slaves of happiness that smirk,
If a sunset was a dream,
The sun would not have fun,
We would all scream,
Live a life of nothing but dreams,
If the sunset was upset,
the tears of the clouds with drop like nothing but rain,
So see what life has gain?
Sunsets,
Sunrise,
Moon and dark,
Life is wonderful,
Sunsets are dark
Would've we all scream?
The sunset is fun of happiness
Happiness some have never seen,
As we all hear the ocean waves,
And the caves that come through,
We hear slaves of not work,
But slaves of happiness that smirk,
If a sunset was a dream,
The sun would not have fun,
We would all scream,
Live a life of nothing but dreams,
If the sunset was upset,
the tears of the clouds with drop like nothing but rain,
So see what life has gain?
Sunsets,
Sunrise,
Moon and dark,
Life is wonderful,
Sunsets are dark
Kayla Kaya- Power Player
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Good Job!
That is a nice poem! Good job! ^-^
Last edited by Nilla Cookie on Wed Nov 17, 2010 9:41 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: A poam i wrote:
Great poem! To me, that's the work of a proffessional!
Katie Dogpaw- Pro Fanatic
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Re: A poam i wrote:
Lols. xD
You going to write more? You should. This one was excellent!!
You going to write more? You should. This one was excellent!!
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