Riddle Poetry
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Nilla Cookie
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Riddle Poetry
See if you can decipher this(mind the word "hell was used the correct way, not inappropriately):
I show you at best
As seen by all
You show me the things
That no one else has saw
I see through you
And you see as well
I have seen things
Condemn some to hell
I have no eyes
I have no voice
You see what I see
Without choice
I can be your best friend
I can be your greatest enemy
You can not hide
Everything you must see
What am I?
Or what am I not?
Am I an illusion?
Or am I taught?
I show you at best
As seen by all
You show me the things
That no one else has saw
I see through you
And you see as well
I have seen things
Condemn some to hell
I have no eyes
I have no voice
You see what I see
Without choice
I can be your best friend
I can be your greatest enemy
You can not hide
Everything you must see
What am I?
Or what am I not?
Am I an illusion?
Or am I taught?
The Painbringer- New Player
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Re: Riddle Poetry
Ehm.. this is difficult. My eyes? My conscience? (I am not sure if I spelled that right.) Uhm.. My mind/brain? Myself? :O
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Nilla Cookie- Pro Fanatic
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Re: Riddle Poetry
Ummmm...............my personality?
Katie Dogpaw- Pro Fanatic
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Re: Riddle Poetry
I thought I heard that somewhere before, or something similar to it .. I just don't remember the answer to it. xD
Icy Rose- Power Player
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Re: Riddle Poetry
You mean like try to rewrite the subject without the whole words? if so:
I am any person,
a friend or a foe,
But i can be like a bison,
Great and tall,
Yet i am here for a reason,
A reason i shall call,
I am not your foe,
as i can recall,
and so i am many things,
that your mind never knew,
and so i am perfect,
yet, not as perfect as you,
I can be a friend,
I can be a foe,
Yet when i look at your face,
Even so...
I can see a place,
so magic, so small,
Yet, all i see is grace,
and yet i am tall,
Something more the open space,
Yet someone i should say for all,
I am myself,
a person of brief,
I am not an elf,
Not a person without grief,
I am herself, itself, my own self,
Without it all,
i could NEVER recall...
a person better then me,
a person, like me,
Yet i ask you now,
and never before,
do you want to be my friend?
Or yet my foe?
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If thats not it then it talks about yourself, and why you don't care about what people think about you, and yet they can be whatever they want to be, your enemy or friend, and tyou want to be yourself, and never change....if thats not it, i got nothing
I am any person,
a friend or a foe,
But i can be like a bison,
Great and tall,
Yet i am here for a reason,
A reason i shall call,
I am not your foe,
as i can recall,
and so i am many things,
that your mind never knew,
and so i am perfect,
yet, not as perfect as you,
I can be a friend,
I can be a foe,
Yet when i look at your face,
Even so...
I can see a place,
so magic, so small,
Yet, all i see is grace,
and yet i am tall,
Something more the open space,
Yet someone i should say for all,
I am myself,
a person of brief,
I am not an elf,
Not a person without grief,
I am herself, itself, my own self,
Without it all,
i could NEVER recall...
a person better then me,
a person, like me,
Yet i ask you now,
and never before,
do you want to be my friend?
Or yet my foe?
-----------
If thats not it then it talks about yourself, and why you don't care about what people think about you, and yet they can be whatever they want to be, your enemy or friend, and tyou want to be yourself, and never change....if thats not it, i got nothing
Kayla Kaya- Power Player
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Re: Riddle Poetry
What Kayla Kaya said is absolutely right. I agree with her. (:
But I got one more guess..
A friend?
If that's not it, I'm done. I have no idea what the answer is.
But I got one more guess..
A friend?
If that's not it, I'm done. I have no idea what the answer is.
Nilla Cookie- Pro Fanatic
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Re: Riddle Poetry
I don't recommed it diffcult or hard, you just have to reread the poam and think about it
Kayla Kaya- Power Player
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Re: Riddle Poetry
Ack! That's so true!! -Reads again- I really think it's my conscience. o.o
Nilla Cookie- Pro Fanatic
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Re: Riddle Poetry
ummm God? Who else can condemn one to Hell? (used correctly also xP)
Annakat- Power Player
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Re: Riddle Poetry
That's also a good guess.. x] Lols, you used that correctly.
I really dunno, but The Painbringer needs to log on so he can tell us the answer.. o.e
I has my 2 guesses. ^-^
•A Friend
•My Conscience
I really dunno, but The Painbringer needs to log on so he can tell us the answer.. o.e
I has my 2 guesses. ^-^
•A Friend
•My Conscience
Nilla Cookie- Pro Fanatic
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Re: Riddle Poetry
my second guess would be death but dunno.
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